Dominick Gordon

Jack’s topic statement is clear and concise and his conclusion is informative, direct, and makes sense. He makes it clear that his audience is of the older generation such as business owners and homeowners. It is clear that the obstacle he is addressing is the false reality that solar energy brings to homeowners. His genre list makes sense as it shows genres that his audience would most likely look at to research his topic. He plans on using a clickbait-style to attract and/or grab the attention of the reader. 

His answers were quite direct and he may want to add more detail in his responses and make them more lengthy so that the reader can get a better understanding. The writing is very easy to read. He is very knowledgeable about his topic and is very trustworthy. You can tell that he put a lot of time and effort into his research.